Your application is almost good to go! But before we accept it, we want to see the following:
» We would like to see an alternate first person sample, since we don't feel like we can gauge the character's voice well in the sample provided. You may submit a linked post or thread, or write a new one out. » In addition, we would also like to see an expanded personality section. While we feel that this section covers many of the basic points, we would like to see this expanded upon.
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